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    Post by hiromoran05 Tue Dec 02, 2008 2:00 am

    I sang
    learned the notes and rhythms
    not because I was unsure,
    but to know when to bring you in
    You sang
    a melody so clean and pure,
    ringing throughout the house
    guided by one frail hand
    We sang together
    boy and viola
    our own private worship
    praising the soul who created music
    and people to play it


    The hymn changed key
    and in all the emotion
    wood connected with flesh
    and I could feel the sound
    and could see the vibrations
    and could hear the Heavens
    no longer boy and viola
    we had become one instrument
    something that transcended bones and strings
    something much more divine
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    Post by ELF Mary Tue Dec 02, 2008 3:41 pm

    hiromoran's poems 410578 cool i like it very much hope you will post more hiromoran's poems 125435
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    Post by Anca Thu Dec 04, 2008 11:12 pm

    such a long poem! O.O
    it's nice and i like the words.
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    Post by hiromoran05 Fri Dec 05, 2008 6:26 am

    thank you!

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